User talk:I Toast My Toast

Your submission at Articles for creation: Brian McCauley (April 28)
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EROS message 08:56, 28 April 2018 (UTC)

Draft:Brian McCauley
Greetings. Per the declination banner, just inserting the hyperlink to your sources will suffice. THis will allow readers to click on the reference and go to the respective sources. EROS message 09:53, 3 May 2018 (UTC)