User talk:Iadao/sandbox

Review by Brian Nghiem
It appears you're still in the process of constructing your article draft. Therefore, I'll just comment based on what you have so far and return back later when you've added more. The current statement by Australia on this issue still raise questions as to whether this is a necessary procedure for young males. On that basis, there is a sense of neutrality since there is consideration of the male individual's decision as well as the parent's feelings, which is a positive. The only other suggestion is to update the section with more relevant and recent articles since the statement was from 2004. So perhaps a more recent statement if possible.

Irina's Peer Edits by Arleah
I plan to add your peer edit on the "sandbox" of your page so Professor Smith can see my peer edit. Please feel free to do the same on my sandbox. If you plan to peer edit in my sandbox, I linked my new sandbox I created and instructions on how to access it in my original sandbox. Please let me know via my original sandbox's talk page where you leave my peer edit. Thank you! leah_ayyy 06:06, 8 April 2019 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Leah611 (talk • contribs)