User talk:Iamandrewrice/Sandbox

This article can be improved in man\y ways. It needs subject headings, as it is just one long text right now. It also needs a lot more refs, so I suggest you look for some, either in books or online.

Images always help, too, but they have to be free or fair use. If you find an image online, have me look at it and we can decide if it is usable or not. Jeffpw (talk) 14:08, 28 November 2007 (UTC)

First edits you made
The term March-May is unclear. If the birth month is disputed or unknown, it is best just to leave it out for someone born so long ago.

The second edit you made was not very clear, Could you explain what you meant about "all other denominations"? readers should be able to grasp your meaning immediately, and not ponder ambiguities. By the way, do you have references which support the edits? Jeffpw (talk) 18:16, 28 November 2007 (UTC)

with regards to french translations...
i have attempted to translate the 'denominate' sentence as best as I can. I have used several different sources, but all give me the same kind of result. However, i am obviously not done translating the article yet...

... and is it not possible to use the references from the french version of the page and just copy them over?... Iamandrewrice (talk) 19:46, 28 November 2007 (UTC)