User talk:Ianhayes72

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Suggestion at Articles for creation/Massachusetts Bottle Bill
I would strongly advise you flesh out your article with more media reporting. If this is a controversial law over the last 30 years, undoubtedly there is media reporting and discussion of it over time. Currently you have mainly an advocacy group and gov't sites, which is a start but not as well-rounded as we'd like. Also, be very careful citing facts to advocacy groups, unless you clearly state "Group X has voiced concerns that the new bill will cause a 25% in fooian-chemical pollution" or whatnot. MatthewVanitas (talk) 19:26, 25 September 2013 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your guidance. I will add more media coverage to the article as recommended and submit for approval.  &mdash; ianhayes72
 * You will confuse the issue with two copies. The text is now at Wikipedia talk:articles for creation/Massachusetts Bottle Bill. &mdash; RHaworth (talk · contribs) 11:34, 28 September 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at AfC Massachusetts Bottle Bill was accepted
 Massachusetts Bottle Bill, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! —John Cline (talk) 04:14, 19 October 2013 (UTC)
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