User talk:Ibrah118/sandbox

Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference? In relation to the Sharon Bruneau article, most of the references are not completely reliable, as I noticed some grammatical errors in the third reference, for example.

Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted? Most of the information comes from blogs, therefore they are not neutral. The bias is not noted in the article; in fact, in one of the sentences it was noted that Sharon is proud that she is one of few Aboriginal females involved in bodybuilding.

Is anything missing that could be added? The early life section is lacking information. I feel that the background life of an Aboriginal athlete should be rich with information as it is an important milestone that got them where they are today in sport.

Ibrah118 (talk) 03:34, 19 March 2018 (UTC)ibrah118