User talk:Ice-DNA

December 2008
Hi, welcome to Wikipedia. I noticed you're making several edits to the article for Disney's Hollywood Studios. While all constructive edits are welcome, and many of the ones you are making are quite helpful, I would suggest that you be careful about exactly what gets added. For example, you changed the subsection on Beauty and the Beast Live on Stage to suggest it was based on the Broadway show that recently closed. However, the actual article for the show states (correctly) that the Hollywood Studios show predates the Broadway show by about 2 years, and that the only change to the show was re-ordering the musical numbers that were already in the show.

Also, some of the edits made to the subsections on Rock N Roller Coaster and the Twilight Zone Tower of Terror really belong in the main attraction articles, provided they are verifiable (e.g., stating that the longest drop on Tower of Terror is 13 stories and takes 2.9 seconds). The items here are mainly short summaries that should connect over to the individual attraction articles.

All that said, I think you may have a good idea rewording the attraction summaries into more proper sentences, removing the commas ... definitely quite constructive and without question in good faith. If you have any questions or comments, please leave them in the article's talk page or on my own talk page. Thanks, and happy editing!

McDoobAU93 (talk) 22:55, 16 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Hi, thank you for your edits. The standard format that has been established on the Disney park-related pages is NOT to include specifics about each attraction on the main park pages (as you have been adding), but rather to include ride information either on the individual ride page or on the page for each land. SpikeJones (talk) 14:34, 17 December 2008 (UTC)