User talk:Ichen21/sandbox

From Diego: 1. What does the article (or section) do well? This article does a good job of informing me what exactly a phenol ether is. Coming from a basic chemistry background, the introduction made sense, and led me to become comfortable reading the rest of the passage. Furthermore, the use of diagrams helped very much in digesting the information. The structure is also good, as no single paragraph is too enormous.

2. What changes would you suggest overall? Theres nothing to really improve on significantly. There is always touch ups and re-reading on certain aspects, but that's always there to think about. Generally, you can add more features to your page. I looked at the page for Anisole, and I saw that it had a section for "see also" which could be useful here. Also, that page has the sidebar feature with the specific stuff, which I'm not sure how to add myself, but it could be helpful and make it look even more professional. Another section was the "safety" section which can also be added.

3. What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? Maybe you can find more real life applications and pictures of it in use, besides the diagrams.

4. Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know!Yes, definitely. I love how information was conveyed in the scientific tone. I'll be sure to try in use that in my writing.

From Kolby: 1. What does the article (or section) do well? Giving lots of detail about a topic, getting the reader's attention with real-world applications and analogies, and introducing an unfamiliar topic.

2. What changes would you suggest overall? More high-level explanations of the chemistry involved with Phenol ethers. I had a hard time understanding most of this article, but this topic seems intended for a specific audience, so that isn't necessarily a problem. Add more colors to your visuals, and add pictures showing real-world examples of Phenol ether depictions, uses, or production. I found it started to get bring in the middle, so anything to keep the reader's attention would be helpful.

3. What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? Add real-world pictures.

4. Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know! That it's ok to target a specific audience, and that pharmaceutical chemistry can be interesting. — Preceding unsigned comment added by KolbyKing (talk • contribs) 20:02, 30 March 2021 (UTC)