User talk:Id-pd-uid

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Please help me edit this article in a more neutral and compliant way.

Thank you in advance


 * First of all, it would help if you didn't remove the unresolved maintenance templates. This article desperately needs more footnotes to clarify which of your sources supports which of the article's statements. For example, which source said his Gulfstream redesign "involv[ed] a fresh but minimalistic form language"? Which international design, lifestyle and luxury magazines did Radev's land yacht receive "popularity" in? What exactly did those magazines have to say? Which source says he's "passionate in sketching & painting"? Have his awards received third-party coverage, or is the organization bestowing the awards the only one that bothered to write about them?
 * This list of examples also highlights the tone issues: Those are good-sounding but ultimately rather information-less claims. At most it might be appropriate to attribute them to a source ("Aircraft Magazine called his form language 'fresh but minimalistic'"), but others should be rewritten (especially the "popularity" and "passionate" lines). Also, we should always refer to Radev by his surname, not his given name. Huon (talk) 19:28, 9 July 2013 (UTC)