User talk:Idizon578/sandbox

I'm not sure you'll see this, Belle, but maybe you will. Anyways, I think you've got good starting information here, but we're lacking focus in our summary. What's Alexander's argument here? What information is used in support of that argument? Further, we're lacking outside contributions. Because of that, I can only give half credit here. 5/10 Swarfe (talk) 02:14, 4 March 2015 (UTC)