User talk:Ieatchurros/New Sandbox

Peer Review
The information you provided was accurate and the sources used were reliable. As far as any changes I would make, I would maybe separate depression and perfectionism into different categories other than mood. Maybe go into a little more explanation on the two, just because one is a mental illness and the other is a social pressure. As for the paraphrasing, I do not think it is bad at all, especially since most of the statistics you got were from charts and graphics, you were able to put them into your own words.

Edixon426 (talk) 18:32, 6 August 2019 (UTC)

Dan's review
Bruno, it seems like you've found reliable data about suicide, I just question whether there's a clear enough connection to perfectionism to warrant putting this info in this article. The section you've chosen to add to seems like it wants to be specifically about the perfectionism-suicide connection, whereas your data seems to be about suicide in general. Have you checked the Wikipedia page for suicide to see if there's room for the data that you found there? Daniel.messier (talk) 12:09, 8 August 2019 (UTC)