User talk:Igoekr21/Vinclozolin

Great start lgoekr21! A few suggestions:

check the formula for vinclozolin- I've run across some pages where comments say the structural formula is wrong, or the wrong compound is depicted.

For Neutral point of view you can't have an overemphasis on toxicity, as that's not NPOV! Check out the NPOV page.

For a good guideline for organizing article, you'll need to cover some of the standard "chemical" bits, following the Manual of Style/Chemistry guidelines. There are several useful sections in those guidelines- check them out and set up your outline to conform to them. Once you have an outline that conforms, then we can look at it and decide which bits you will focus on. Then let me know when to look at this again... Hakeleh (talk) 14:47, 12 October 2011 (UTC)hakeleh

lgoekr21- not much progress between october 6 and october 19 (when a big outline needed to be posted!) besides pasting the generic outline for how to write about chemicals. Please integrate this with the outline you provided up above, and I'm assuming you have already been collecting references - these need to be listed! Each of the outline headings also need considerable fleshing out including the points your plan to make in each section. Hakeleh (talk) 18:28, 22 October 2011 (UTC)hakeleh

lgoekr21 - much of the content you've added is direct quotation from the references you've included, and needs to be indicated as such, or, preferably, taken off of the site. See my email to you. Hakeleh (talk) 01:05, 24 October 2011 (UTC)hakeleh