User talk:Iivanchentw/sandbox

Review by: Ivan Chen

IamCorleone34,

In the article 'Attica Prison riot', you have a great deal of information that correlates to the topic and subject material. The spelling, grammar, as well as punctuation all appear to be correct. I do see that there are some instances where there are missing citations, under the introductory section, under the 'Retaking of the prison and retaliation' section, and under the 'Racial issues' section. Aside from all of the relevant sections of information which you have added into the Wiki Article, you also provide great examples of where the topic and subject of the 'Attica Prison riot' appear in popular culture, ranging from books, film, music, poetry, and television. For key terms, whether people, places, or terms, you have also inserted hyperlinks to corresponding informational pages where such may be clarified by the reader. Other than some minor adjustments to the page, for missing citations, I feel that your headings are well established, the content is thorough, and your spelling, grammar, and punctuation are correct. Therefore, other than inserting some missing citations, for improving your Wiki article, I think that your Wiki article is very proficient and informative without bias or personal opinions.

````Ivan Chen