User talk:Ijkirkpatrick

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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit if you feel they have been resolved.
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more specific advice
Jensen is notable, but the article needs to be written in a proper encyclopedic style--see WP:FIRST for assistance. Write in full paragraphs, first one on his biographical details and education, then one or more on his technical work, and also one or more on his commercial dealings. Wikipedia needs references providing substantial coverage from  3rd party independent published reliable sources, print or online, but not blogs or press releases, or material derived from press releases. The best source at present is the aes article, but use it as a source of information--avoid both direct copying   Close paraphrase. Write  from scratch, changing not just the words, but the arrangement into sentences and the sequence of ideas.

There should be numerous other good sources. There should be several obituaries, as well as the book mentioned on the aes page; any librarian can help you find them. If you need any assistance, please ask me directly on  ''' my user talk page.   DGG''' ( talk ) 20:46, 3 August 2013 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Peter L. Jensen concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Peter L. Jensen, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 02:09, 21 January 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at AfC Peter L. Jensen was accepted
 Peter L. Jensen, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!  DGG ( talk ) 15:40, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
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