User talk:Ijuf.Barney

Your submission at Articles for creation: Crossing Bayabas National High School (February 16)
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David. moreno 72   11:11, 16 February 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Crossing Bayabas National High School has been accepted
 Crossing Bayabas National High School, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!  Kees08  (Talk)   09:22, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
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Crossing Bayabas National High School ‎
Hello, I wanted to explain further why I have removed your recent changes at Crossing Bayabas National High School. I spent a lot of time trying to bring that article into compliance with the Manual of Style. Your recent additions undid those improvements, and added even more errors. The article contained a huge amount of unnecessary bold and italic text. Lists generally need bullet points, not numbers. We don't use honorifics such as "Mrs." These, and many more conventions, are covered in the Manual of Style, and your work should try to conform to those rules.

Your contributions are appreciated, but please do not add more to any article until you better understand how content should be presented here. If I can help with anything, just let me know. Thanks, Jessicapierce (talk) 17:45, 23 September 2018 (UTC)


 * I would really like to see your contributions be more in line with Wikipedia's style guide, in order to save other editors unnecessary work. It's rather rude to revert my edits without comment, especially as I am trying to help improve the article you seem to care about. I would appreciate a response, please. Jessicapierce (talk) 15:44, 25 September 2018 (UTC)