User talk:Ikevorkian01/sandbox

Peer Review for the article Red Dress Party The new editions to the article are very helpful and really expand the knowledge of Red Dress Parties. The lead section could be more summarized. The information in the lead section is good but maybe some of it could be moved into another paragraph maybe one referring to the history of Red Dress Parties and then use the lead section to outline the rest of the article more. The editions of new locations for Red Dress Parties is also good. Some of them could have a little more meat to their paragraphs and the section on Seattle didn't have any references cited. Overall the information seems strong and unbiased throughout the article. There are a couple grammar/punctuation errors here and there but nothing major.Emily Pistorova (talk) 19:39, 19 November 2020 (UTC) User Emily Pistorova