User talk:Ilee679/sandbox

A lot of edits have already occurred! When you make the edits to the main article page (i.e. when you leave the sandbox and move your work to the mainpage), make sure that you leave comments to briefly indicate what you changed and why.

For our class, it looks like there's a lot to be said here about simplifying sentence structure and also adopting the Wikipedia style. Style is a topic you may want to talk about for the VT discussion this week, and you may have some good examples here that you could share with us!Cakers01 (talk) 20:55, 7 April 2020 (UTC)