User talk:Ilmayo94/sandbox

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I agree that you need many more footnotes and in text citations - particularly the subsections on international relations, advertising ... that have no references! Your teacher --Calfux (talk) 18:18, 16 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi, i'm your online tutor for this course. As a first review i would suggest to carefully read the Manual of style and in particular the layout section. Wikipedia pages must follow a common structure to help users to find informations inside them. So please, as first step, read it. One more important thing is footnotes. Wikipedia pages are based on bibliographic sources so please add some more. If you need any help please write me! --Baldersdod (talk) 09:53, 13 December 2018 (UTC)