User talk:Ilxsa/sandbox

Hey Lisa!

The format of your sandbox looks great! Your article evaluation is thorough and summarizes the content perfectly. You cited everything properly and used a neutral tone in your evaluation. The possible edits portion works well too! If you do decide to add the first sentence that you wrote, I would take out the word “try” because it does sound slightly loaded. Leaving it to simply what they “claim” is a perfect addition to the Wikipedia page "Hegemonic Masculinity". Great work!

Emsager190 (talk) 22:08, 12 December 2018 (UTC)