User talk:Im.turner/sandbox

Peer Review by Mztissa Overall, your sandbox is constructed really well and I get a clear idea of your plans for your article. Your draft starts very strong because you clearly define Penis Envy and I can tell you have done extensive research on your article. Adding a section in your article for Freud's theory was not only smart but necessary since penis envy is one of his psychosexual development theories. I can tell that you have found enough sources to develop a good, strong article and I'm excited to read it when it's fully developed. What I can suggest is that you could use clear, plain language when you paraphrase a text so that readers who come across this article for the very first time could easily understand it, and therefore would be educated on your subject since Wikipedia is a place for learning. Great job overall, I look forward to reading your article once you publish it. Good luck! Mztissa 19:54, 18 November 2018 (UTC)