User talk:Imaang/sandbox

Peer Review Imaan
I would find a referenced source to add more information, also delete any information that seems incorrect. Also maybe create a section that is purely politics to set the information straight. Find some better sources as you already started. Very nice article to review, really interesting and can get a bunch of information. --Asantiago787 (talk) 17:54, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

Evaluate an Article - Peer Review
To start off, I would make more of a distinction between your sections, it is a little hard/confusing to see where old things end and new things start. I think your ideas on what you want to work on are good, just keep working on drafting up something that you can post for the assignment. Another thing that can be worked on a little is the references, create a subheading for them and integrate them within your draft. Mercadesglancy (talk) 04:55, 20 October 2018 (UTC)