User talk:Imandin408/Gaming in Endangered Languages

Final Review
Hi Iman, this is my feedback for your final project. As a reminder, the 6 points on which I'm grading you are Language, Structure, Balance, Accuracy, Relevance, and Length. Here are my assessments on each of those areas:


 * 1) Language: On the whole, the article employs proper English spelling and grammar. 5 points.
 * 2) Structure: The article is well-structured, but I wish the lead reflected this. 5 points.
 * 3) Balance: At present, the article appears to reflect a neutral point of view. 5 points.
 * 4) Accuracy: The claims appear to be accurate and are supported by references. 5 points.
 * 5) Relevance: Not all of information is relevant, particularly the history section, which focuses on the history of the people rather than the history of the language they speak. 5 points.
 * 6) Length: Word count 1670/2000 (including headers but not bibliography). 4 points.

The final score is 29/30. Have a great summer! Chuck Haberl (talk) 23:11, 11 May 2021 (UTC)