User talk:Imani Florence

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Hello, Imani Florence, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hi! The proposed edits look good. My only true note would be that you could style the birth dates like this: Antoinette (born 1877). It's not absolutely imperative though. Also, can you give a little more context for why the children didn't attend school or stopped attending? Also, the child who died should be referred to as "who" not "what".

So far so good though! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:13, 23 April 2020 (UTC)