User talk:Immcarle35/sandbox

For the wikipedia project, I want to explore the function of lymphotoxin and its role in immune regulation.

Link for background information about lymphotoxin:

"Lymphotoxin and TNF: How it all began-A tribute to the travelers" http://apps.webofknowledge.com/full_record.do?product=WOS&search_mode=GeneralSearch&qid=2&SID=2DxTNByPJLlkFlh3ZMA&page=2&doc=82&cacheurlFromRightClick=no

'''Multiple Roles of being an immune regulator: ''' "Tumor necrosis factor and lymphotoxin in regulation of intestinal inflammation" http://apps.webofknowledge.com/full_record.do?product=WOS&search_mode=GeneralSearch&qid=2&SID=2DxTNByPJLlkFlh3ZMA&page=1&doc=3&cacheurlFromRightClick=no

"TNF and Lymphotoxin in immune regulation and cancer" http://apps.webofknowledge.com/full_record.do?product=WOS&search_mode=GeneralSearch&qid=2&SID=2DxTNByPJLlkFlh3ZMA&page=1&doc=36&cacheurlFromRightClick=no

" Dendritic cell regulation of NK-cell responses involves lymphotoxin-, IL-12, and TGF-" http://apps.webofknowledge.com/full_record.do?product=WOS&search_mode=GeneralSearch&qid=2&SID=2DxTNByPJLlkFlh3ZMA&page=1&doc=41&cacheurlFromRightClick=no

Peer Review: I thought that the article had a great organization and good transitions; I could clearly follow what you were saying. There were a couple grammatical errors that a quick read through would fix (watch single/plurals and a couple a/an), and overall I didn't see any odd sentences or anything that didn't make sense. I thought it was great that you incorporated the current research on the subject, and reiterated that more research is being done to find out more about the topic. I was a little unsure what cells the cytokine worked with- you only said peripheral blood cells and along with its effects, not what specific cells it was affecting within the immune system (though it's possible that they just don't know this yet or it doesn't extensively interact with the rest of the immune system?). Overall, great work!

Immcarle46 (talk) 01:55, 13 February 2017 (UTC)