User talk:Immortalsofthesky

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mohammad H. Mehrmand (December 26)
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Ratnahastin (talk) 05:03, 26 December 2023 (UTC)


 * Thank you Ratnahastin for your feedback. Is the problem the nature and number of sources themselves? Or is it more a matter of adding more citations in the text to refer to those sources? The sources themselves are published biographies of the general and others serving with him as well as the most reliable source on the IIAF itself- its website. Thanks again! Immortalsofthesky (talk) 19:48, 26 December 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mohammad H. Mehrmand (February 6)
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The Herald (Benison) (talk) 05:25, 6 February 2024 (UTC)