User talk:Impulsivemk/Problematic integration theory/Dj922 Peer Review

Hello! This page currently provides a comprehensive and unbiased overview of the theory. One direction you could take is to expand on other ways that PI has been applied. This could also encourage the usage of other citations, which presents one major problem with this page. Although, this page includes 28 references, they are sourced from 3 authors, further, Barbow’s multiple citations come from the same book and page. Another problem with the page is the inclusion of UMT, complete with a section header and full overview of this theory, but without linking the actual page) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Uncertainty_management_theory With these updates our Wikiproject can continue to provide shareable knowledge on Communication Theory. Dj922 (talk) 02:23, 17 October 2022 (UTC)