User talk:Imr245/sandbox

First of all, The paragraph is well written however there is no subtext to tell me what is the text for (I assumed early career) Secondly, there are no citations internal or external.Ahmed Abdelkariem (talk) 18:35, 29 November 2018 (UTC)Ahmed Abdel

Informative histroy behind her story. My suggestions would be to include the Headings and subheading for which section you want to enter this information into. I would also add citations and a reason for why this particular work was so important to this author.--18:48, 29 November 2018 (UTC)Brbrewer94 (talk)

include Headings, subheading, citation, links and more information.Rme22031 (talk) 18:51, 29 November 2018 (UTC)

The small paragraph is really good but its the small thing you are missing. Like subtexts, heading. Also more citations.Majid367 (talk) 19:06, 29 November 2018 (UTC)Umar Rana