User talk:InShaneee/Archive/Mar/2013

Corner Tube Boilers: rewritten
Hello InShaneee I wrote my first article about the concept of Cornertube boilers on 16th Jan 2013 which was nominated and hence deleted speedily because of lack of notability and copyright infringement policy of WP. I have rewritten the article this time without any copy-paste methods and with third party resources and its still in process in my sandbox. I would like to ask for your opinion and comments on the present article and in case I have done some mistake which will nominate it for speedy deletion it is completely UNINTENTIONAL. Thank you for your time and effort to make this article better in advance. Ghorpaapi (talk) 09:29, 13 March 2013 (UTC)
 * I hope you don't mind, but I copyedited the article in your sandbox a bit for clarity. Overall, I think it's a good article. Just a few points:
 * Since 'corner tube boiler' isn't a proper noun, make sure not to capitalize it.
 * If I were you, I'd remove the letters in the Working section; since the diagram is already labeled, it's just interrupting the flow of the paragraph.
 * That external link at the bottom needs to go. Per WP:EL, it doesn't add much in the way of extra information, it's not in english, and as a vendor site, it's inappropriate anyway.
 * Other than those points, I think this is an article that's ready for publishing. Good job! InShaneee (talk) 09:45, 13 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the editing, motivation and feedback . I am still going to improve this article and use the left over thirdparty resources which I still have to add value and content to this concept. I am going to remove the external link and add another source which will suffice the quote for different fuels. Ghorpaapi (talk) 16:12, 13 March 2013 (UTC)