User talk:Incandescent1/sandbox

Hello Callum, welcome to your feedback...

On the whole, spelling and grammar was of a good standard. feedback from peers reported that there were, at some points within the article, a few minor grammatical and spelling errors. a simple copy edit could help to resolve this small issue. Regarding the lead section of the article, the feedback stated that it was of a very good standard. Additions, however could have been made to the section by listing more definitions of the word villain from other sources, rather than including just one definition from a sole source. The layout and divisions of the sections within the article are clearly set out. The article was separated thematically in a very clear manner. One inclusion that could be used would be that of an info-box. The feedback explains that this would be beneficial, by providing supplementary information, helping the overall layout of the article. In terms of section length, feedback from peers highlighted that the article could do with further development in some sections (fairy-tale, sympathetic). Sources were well balanced and generally very reliable, from reputable outlets. Is the photo and music copyright free, as a general inquiry.

Gilly22 (talk) 11:37, 26 March 2019 (UTC)