User talk:Incdogrobber

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Hi there,

Although a wonderful effort at writing, unfortunately there are some issues with your submission which need to be addressed. Let me highlight those here
 * 1) Citation - You need to write your article about the book and not the story of the book.
 * 2) Formatting - The presentation of the article in its current form reads like an essay and not an encyclopedia article.

To get a better idea of what I am talking about, you may want to read an existing similar article like The Catcher in the Rye to get a feel of how to structure your article.

All the best in your writing effort and hope to see an improved version real soon. Thank you for contributing to Wikipedia.

regards

abhishek singh (talk) 17:22, 12 March 2011 (UTC)

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