User talk:Indnegi

Cutting and pasting copyrighted text
Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. We appreciate your, but for legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted.

You may use external websites as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words.

If the external website belongs to you, and you want to allow Wikipedia to use the text — which means allowing other people to modify it — then you must include on the external site the statement "I, (name), am the author of this article, (article name), and I release its content under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.3 and later."

You might want to look at Wikipedia's policies and guidelines for more details, or ask a question at the "Help Desk". You can also leave a message on my talk page. OhNo itsJamie Talk 05:58, 26 February 2009 (UTC)

You are still copying and pasting whole paragraphs of text from websites, I found whole sentences copied from here, here and here. Adding a few words in the middle is not enough, you have to re-tell it with your own words. Also, don't add it on the start of the article, you are breaking the Manual of Style conventions for the lead paragraphs (WP:LEAD). Add the information on the relevant section of the article. Also, sorry to say this, but, if you replace well-written text with poorly-written text that says the same, then you are going to be reverted too. Try adding small snippets of information with sources, instead of writing full paragraphs and replacing text. --Enric Naval (talk) 14:01, 28 February 2009 (UTC)