User talk:Ingrid WAGNON/sandbox

I think these ideas are great to add to the article. I like all of the sources used; there is interesting information and it seems to be reliable. The only things I think could be changed are some small grammar or clarity errors, and maybe you could explain some concepts/studies a little more thoroughly and get a little deeper into the studies, but I know this is just a draft. Overall I think you did a good job! Katesingletary (talk) 02:23, 25 September 2016 (UTC)