User talk:Inkian Jason/Nkhotakota Wildlife Reserve

I am not used to dealing with possible CoI creations but I think you have struck a reasonable compromise here. Your article seems largely satisfactory and ready to move into mainspace. There are a few points I would mention.


 * The reserve is said to be the oldest wildlife reserve in Malawi. Can you expand the History section to include something of its past before 2012?
 * The article has a tendency to be over-referenced. For example, Prince Harry was involved in helping to relocate animals, but this is not a controversial point, and you don't need three citations to back it up, one will be quite sufficient.

Pinging you because I am not sure whether you will otherwise see this. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:23, 30 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reviewing the draft. I created this overview of the reserve based on information I could find by searching via Google, Google News, and HighBeam Research. I would have loved to include more about pre-2012 history, but struggled to find sourcing. Hopefully this is something editors can continue to contribute to over time. I'll do some more searching but feel I've been fairly thorough. Do you want to see if you can find some sources to incorporate into the draft? You're welcome to copy over the current version of the draft, then make subsequent improvements in the main space, or make improvements to this draft directly. Perhaps I included too many inline citation for Prince Harry, but I wanted to make sure editors had access to a variety of sources for both years. Feel free to trim the unnecessary inline citations, or let me know which ones you think are overkill, thanks! Inkian Jason (talk) 17:09, 30 November 2017 (UTC)