User talk:Inkiee

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (January 8)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by David.moreno72 was:

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David. moreno 72   05:42, 8 January 2018 (UTC)

Van G. Garrett
I don't disagree with the items that you added. However, much of the language is too subject and none is backed by authoritative references. Changes are needed or the language you added is likely to be removed.--Rpclod (talk) 12:07, 8 January 2018 (UTC)