User talk:Inongimke

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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit if you feel they have been resolved.
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I made some changes to the article, focusing on tone and on emphasizing in the intro the things that imply notability. It probably needs more work, but I'm done for tonight. See what you think.

Wikipedia's "house style" is fairly dry and formal, and must always take a neutral point of view. This writing style takes some getting used to.

In your message you mentioned issues with sources not being online. This is not at all a requirement; references to print sources are encouraged. Templates such as cite book and cite magazine can help with formatting. If the source is originally in print, but an online copy is available, you format the entry as a print source but add a "url=" field. The result is similar to the cite web template, but with some slight differences relating to the fact that the print source is the original. This may help with the issue you mentioned, with referencing print sources for which the only online copy you have found is posted on the subject of the article's web site.

I haven't read all of the sources and evaluated whether they are enough to establish notability yet. One of the issues raised at the help desk relates to the amount of coverage of him. What they are getting at is summarized here. To establish notability, there needs to be several good, reliable, independent sources that directly discuss the subject of the article.--Srleffler (talk) 06:35, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Benoit Poirier d'Ambreville, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! ☯ Bonkers The Clown  \(^_^)/  Nonsensical Babble  ☯ 03:38, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
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