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 * co-edited and co-authored three books, Developing with Foreign Investment with Dr Vince Cable Developing with Foreign Investment: Amazon.co.uk: Vince Cable, Bishnodat Persaud: Books... in  1987;

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As reviewing administrator, I did not delete the article: there are sources. However, the sources are not clearly shown. In the biography of a living person, each individual statement or group of related statements must have a specific reliable source, normally expressed as a footnote ( for the usual technique see our page, Referencing for Beginners ). The reference must be specific: it must give the necessary information to verify the material online or in a library. A list of references at the end is not enough, nd neither is a vague description of the source that would require research to identify. .

There are some other problems: some basic data is missing: his date and place of birth, where he lived before college, where he went to school. His colleges are given, but not the years of his degrees. His career needs to be presented in chronological order, with emphasis of the most important parts. His publications need to be specified exactly in full bibliographic format: all authors/editors, exact title, publisher, place and date, ISBN. -- the best place to find the information is WorldCat. If any of the books have been reviewed in Reliable sources, the reviews should be listed also. Amazon is not a reliable source for this purpose.

We do not use titles in our articles. The full name is given at the first mention; after that, he should be  referred to by his last name only, or by just the word "he". We avoid duplicating material between the different sections. We certainly avoid duplicating material between the article on him and the one on his spouse. As a detail, his named professorship is the more important, "University Professor" in this context just means emeritus or retired. I've made some of these changes, but more work is needed.  DGG ( talk ) 00:39, 8 September 2013 (UTC)