User talk:Intriplikit

Your submission at Articles for creation: Suzy Willson (director) (January 30)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Heliosxeros was:

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EROS message 10:39, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

Your submission, Draft:Suzy Willson (director)
Greetings and apologies for me delayed reply. Your submission is in need of diverse references. The references, Queen Mary University of London would be counted as primary source while The Stage is redirected to a "sign-up" page from my end. I would suggest picking your sources from either a major newspaper, a factual, widely-published book, high-quality generally trusted mainstream publications, which are nothing written by the subject, paid for by the subject, or affiliated with the subject. Not their website, and not a press release. For clarity visit: WP:PSTS. Plus, many sentences in the early life and career section are in need of sources for verification as your submission is a BLP. Inclined sources are vital for BLPs because the references will act as evidence when factual dispute arises assuming one is afflicted. Cheers and happy editing. EROS message 12:46, 13 February 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Paul Clark (composer) (February 14)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by The Drover's Wife was:

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The Drover&#39;s Wife (talk) 02:20, 14 February 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Paul Clark (composer) (January 15)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Clarityfiend was:

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Clarityfiend (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2019 (UTC)