User talk:Iobal/sandbox

this is ella. i really like the pictures. i dont know much about faults so it helps me understand what youre talking about.

1. (Done well): - Very clear outline - I like how the subheadings in "Types of Faults" correspond to the types of faults in the right image. 2. (Suggestions): - In "Types of Faults", having pictures on both the left and right side kind of squish the text, which makes it harder to follow each specific type of fault. - The second sentence in your summary of Anderson's Fault Theory was hard to decipher; I reread it a few times before I got it. 3. (Most Important Improvement): - For "Principle Stress" in "Theory and Principle Stresses" you refer to the sigma 1, sigma 2, and sigma 3 labels in the image. I suggest breaking the whole paragraph into multiple paragraphs and explaining how sigma 1, 2, and 3 specifically relate to normal, reverse, and strike-slip faults. 4. (Applicable to me): - I really like the external link to the fault animation (my computer doesn't have flash? so it can't render the animation) and the images + added sources Andmarsh (talk) 14:27, 25 October 2021 (UTC)