User talk:Ira.morga3/sandbox

I love the contents and the research you are doing. One thing I would do is adding a brief overview section and putting the background section first.

The content is great and well written, the research topic is also very relevant. However, perhaps work more on citations, and include more citations for what you have written. Overall, great start though. Yuangd (talk) 19:31, 28 October 2018 (UTC)yuangd