User talk:Irenemyo22/sandbox

Citations for your sources should be included in the text so that we are able to know from what sources the different the information is coming from. The structure of your work is very organized and clear. The wording seems neutral and precise. MiguelAngelFimbres (talk) 13:18, 19 April 2018 (UTC)

Marietou Peer Review
To start off with, you did a great job at providing substantial information that the page was lacking. Some suggestions I have is to provide citations for the second section of your work titled "Multimedia and Social Work". There are no citations in this section this can make readers thin that it is not reliable information if there is not a source for them to follow. Also make sure that the citation is a good source like an academic journal. I like the fact that you provided hyperlinks to other Wikipedia pages! There are a couple spelling and grammatical errors in some of the section so I suggest proofreading your article yourself or maybe asking someone to do it for you. However, the article seems to be written in your own words and is clear to non-experts as well. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mdiallo101 (talk • contribs) 13:31, 19 April 2018 (UTC)