User talk:Isaacg751/sandbox

From Ian: -introduction is solid and gives a very basic overview on what a GHG footprint is and how it's relevant. -the quote in the middle of the introduction is a bit bulky; I would highly recommend talking more about attempts to reduce GHG footprints and more regarding the science measuring and reducing GHG. -would highly recommend adding pictures, graphs, etc. to make it more easy to consume.

From Diego: 1. What does the article (or section) do well? This article does a good job of informing me what exactly a GHG footprint is. There is a good amount of summary and description to give me context for new, more specific and intricate information you could possible present.

2. What changes would you suggest overall?First, there is the length aspect. Here, the information is very brief and a summary of the information, but perhaps looking into more specific aspects of GHG footprints, like the impact, causes, effects, and perhaps more scientific(chemistry) information on how they work.

3. What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? Include pictures and allusions to more specific areas of GHG footprints.

4. Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know!Yes, definitely. Before, I was stuck on how to include more information, but from looking over your structure of the article, I now have more ideas on how to incorporate them into my article.