User talk:IsabelD

As we (myself, Kaja, and Ahouansivi) begin working to improve this article, we will give attention to its lead (which is currently very poor), structure (which is currently very disorganized), and writing quality (which is not consistent with featured article standards).

Chronic stress
Dear IsabelD,

As nobody reacted to my post on the talk page of Chronic stress, I come here. I have just placed a "welcome" template above, wth lny helpful links on how to write a good WP article. I am afraid that the modifications made to the chronic stress article do not adhere to these guidelines. In fact, the article is worse now than it was before. Just a few of many issues: the article's lead should start with a concise definition of the subject of the article, which it now does not any more. Articles should be written in a non-personal encyclopedic style, so you should avoid expressions such as "anybody who has ever experienced" and such. Statements need to be sourced, too. Please have a look at the links above. Happy editing! --Crusio (talk) 07:42, 12 April 2010 (UTC)