User talk:IsabellaSciComm

A kitten for you!
Even though dogs are way cooler

Gld44 (talk) 20:08, 5 October 2017 (UTC) 

Midshipman fish
Hi, and thanks for your efforts to improve this article. Two things: 1) Vocalization is now in both major sections (chapters) of the article, which can't be right, can it? 2) Vocalization now takes up about 3/4 of the article, which is beginning to sound like what we call a coatrack, i.e. a convenient hook on which to hang a story that actually belongs elsewhere, say an article called Vocalization in midshipman fish. In other words, we're getting an article which should be about the fish's features, biology, ecology, evolution, taxonomy, bioluminescence, ...etc, filled up with one aspect which however fascinating, etc, is rather taking over. I suggest we split it now; though it would also be good to write a bit about these other aspects of the fish. All the best, Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:14, 3 December 2017 (UTC)