User talk:Isabellasiragusa/New sandbox

Your addition to the article is done very well. You have sources to back up your information and you remain neutral through the entirety of the section. One piece of advice I have is that I noticed a couple of sentences that didn't sound very formal or flow well with the section. Overall, very good job! Caromullen (talk) 05:40, 22 October 2018 (UTC)