User talk:Isabelvillela/sandbox

Peer review
Hey Isabel! You have done a good job in providing context on why the Dalai Lama regards Christians as a good role model with regards to their political and social involvement in the world. In addition to that you have been successful in presenting a clear structured article with objective neutral content. Perhaps a few examples of Christian social and political influence in todays society would more clearly indicate the kind of action the Dalai Lama was referring to. Otherwise great job. (Michaelhav1 (talk) 01:57, 20 October 2018 (UTC))

Peer Review from Josie
Hi Isabel, I think that your topic is a very interesting choice! I cannot tell where you are planning on using the quotes within the article, but I think that they are all relevant and supportive to your topic. ColorMyPencils (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 06:32, 20 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review from Kumale
Hello Isabel! I think that you did a great job of identifying where the article could use more information and further explaining to the reader what the Dalai Lama meant in his statement. I see that you used the dissertation and Stone's book as sources and wanted to know if you are planning to use quotes from the sources you used in the article. Overall, good job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by KumaleFufa (talk • contribs) 14:40, 23 October 2018 (UTC)