User talk:Iskang15/Granblue Fantasy Versus/Bibliography

Hi, nice work on your article bibliography. It seems like you've found 3 articles in gaming magazines with new information that can be added to the article. In particular I think that summarizing the plot, updating the 'reception' section with the review you found, discussion of the design philosophy, and the details you found about the different versions of the game and cross-platform play all together seem like a good amount of information that will really improve the article! At this point, it seems pretty clear that the next thing for you to do will be to integrate that information with the rest of the article! I encourage you to do this before the peer-review so that you can get feedback on the updated version of the article instead of just the bullet points you pulled out from the article. That said, I think you're off to a good start and I'm excited to see how your article develops!

Groceryheist (talk) 23:54, 24 January 2021 (UTC)