User talk:Islbai

Mary Pirie
hello! thanks for your edits to the page for Mary Pirie - they're very welcome! Just a couple of notes 1) about referencing - you can re-use existing references. I just mention this as I think you might have re-added some that were already there? You'll see there's some red writing in that section now. If you go into edit mode and click the citation button, there's a tab for re-use - just pick from that list. 2) the word passionate in the lead might not be construed as neutral - it's so easy to be enthusiastic but do take a look at WP:NPOV 3) If the findmypast link is clocked is just takes a casual reader to a request to log in - please could you change the reference so it tells the reader what it is referring to? 4) I saw there's some references to what she believed, citing her books - a more explicit way of doing this might be to quote from her books? It's great to see these changes added, and please be encouraged! It takes a little while to get used to the different guidelines within Wikipedia! If you have any questions, please do ask me, very happy to help! Lajmmoore (talk) 06:53, 3 April 2023 (UTC)