User talk:Issaomari/Brave Space Alliance/Stellydellybelly Peer Review

To start, the article has clear sections highlighting this organization's main aspects.

Although I think "BSA serves the queer BIPOC community with the help of mutual aid programs and a full-time team. BSA plans to expand and grow in Hyde Park[5]. The BSA services thousands of people each week with their pantry, support groups, and mutual aid programs. These mutual aid programs help people experiencing housing and food insecurity and provide safety for sex workers. Lockers are offered for the homeless, as well as free makeup, wigs, and other supplies[5] [6]." make more sense to be put under services, not organizational structure. You are saying these are the services the organization provides for the people.

When reading the first sentence, "Brave Space Alliance is a Chicago-based 501c3 non-profit organization[1]," As someone unfamiliar with nonprofit organizations, the 501c3 was confusing to read, and I am not sure what that means. You could add a link or briefly explain it in one sentence. What significance does it have with this organization?

I would make a small word choice change in this sentence under History. "The work involves constructing and funding a new center that aims to open in 2024[4]." To sound more confirmative, you could change it to "plan" or "set."

Under leadership, you could add the significance of what the new board member has done since becoming CEO. What are their accomplishments? How have they run differently? It doesn't have to be a whole paragraph, but something Parker did that stood out.

I didn't notice any biased language, so good job on that! If I did miss something, I'm sure someone else will notice it.

From reading this article, I understand that the BSA supports the LGBTQ+ community with pantries, support groups, and mutual aid programs (said mutual aid programs listed). If this is right, great job! If my understanding is not right, you can add more about how this organization helps to give more knowledge to the readers. --Stellydellybelly (talk) 19:16, 7 April 2024 (UTC)