User talk:It's barnaby jones/sandbox

So before, I had been blocked for promotional editing. I'm trying not to do that any more. But, I do want to put up a page about the inventor of the rubber heel, Humphrey O'Sullivan, who originally founded the company, which has since changed hands and production materials. I just want to make sure I'm not going to be blocked again. The information I've gathered is all solid, from secondary sources only(web, books and US patents!) and is all well-sourced. Could someone please look at what I have written and help me trim it down? It's all in my sandbox, so I'm not sure how it can be viewed.It&#39;s barnaby jones (talk) 19:04, 6 August 2012 (UTC)