User talk:Itorres06/sandbox

Felicia's Peer Review
Overall, I think this is a really great start to your article on Robert Leonard! I like the fact that you opted to take a very comprehensive approach in detailing Leonard's life, including important elements like education, qualifications, and career. Additionally, your citations are extensive and I especially appreciate the numerous in-text links to related Wikipedia articles. This speaks to the amount of thorough research you guys have done up until this point, and all of the sources appear to be credible. Your decision to detail Leonard's role in several high-profile court cases definitely enhances the article and serves to show readers concrete instances of his relevancy and expertise. The only critic that I might have is your inclusion of a New York Times quote under the "Edited version of the current paragraph" bullet point. It might be better to remove that quote entirely, just because it could potentially be viewed as biased information (especially the "turns out to have been an inspired choice" part). Also, I might consider deleting the "Fun Facts" heading and just moving the information under that heading to the career section. The only reason I say that is because "fun facts" might come across not encyclopedia-like. Besides from that, I did not find any grammar or spelling mistakes. Great job! :)