User talk:ItsAldin

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Monster Hunter Rise: Difference between revisions - Wikipedia

Feel free to critique me! My main issue with it after posting is the lack of brevity in the summary (after looking, no one's summary looks like that), but I'm not going to repost a summary because it does its job and there isn't any incorrect information or anything, just wildly longer than most summaries. Here's my attempt at a better one:

Corrected tense and changed wording about game pass for chorological redundancy. Changed tense of sunbreak release date and added citation. Changed the author on a citation to the correct one. Removed overly redundant repeat citation from the line. ItsAldin (talk) 12:13, 3 May 2023 (UTC)